Feedback and Improved version of cover/ad, based on feedback from peer assessment

I have used informal communication to get my feedback. I was havig a verbal skype conversation. However, I have asked the user to provide text so I can produce evidence for my feedback.

I want my digipak to represent a girl's world and mind. I have used the colours pink and purple becuase those colours are sterotypically linked to girls. I have created pink clouds to show to the audience that this album is a symbolsim of a world. Moreove,r I have got my main girl sitting down in her world to show that this is her world.

Shooting & Edting

Today is the day i have shooted my music video. Last year I've spent time after time filming on each different day. This year I wanted to approach my coursework quite differently. I have decided to shoot my music video from 9:00 AM - 5:00 PM. The outcome of this day was successful given that I have got all the clips I've wanted.

When it came to editing, I had a major problem with my lip syncing and I am finding it hard to resolve this issue. Howeve,r I beleive andfelt that there are other solutions. I have done some research and I have found out that directors uses this idea called a Cut away shot. This is when you fill up the empty spaces in your clip with clips. So on the 26/02/2011, I have got my main girl to come back again to re-film and I have re-filmed her singing the whole song to the end as well as singing the harmonies with her writing in her notebook. Now that I have got my cutaway shtos, I can nowcomplete my music video

Research - analysing CD album covers, Digipaks and Magazine poster